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06 October 2009 @ 01:00 pm
DRA(W)BBLE DUEL #4  
Dra(w)bble Duel #4 is OPEN! :D



Prompt of the week: Fight! Fight! Fight!



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Remember, the score stands at 28 to 28, a tie!
 
 
hull1984: Fire&Ice2hull1984 on October 7th, 2009 10:13 pm (UTC)
Submission
Title: I Win
Team: Team Ron
Prompt: Fight! Fight! Fight!
Rating: PG
Word count: 100

Fight fight fight

The chant echoes around the hallway. The crowd gathers, taking up the call.

Fight fight fight.

They’re use to this. This is familiar.

Panting, punching, bruising. Blood splatters onto his fist. Pale skin is stained beneath him. White hair spread out on dark walnut.

Fight fight fight.

Purple mottled skin, nail scarred wrists.

And there, curled deep down in his belly. Warm anticipation.

Later. Away from the crowd. Pillowed in silk.

New, and infinitely more dear. Blissfully terrifying and too unknown.

Harder harder harder.

Pale skin, neck stained purple.

Whispers, gasped into quiet places.

Fight fight fight.


Edited at 2009-10-07 10:28 pm (UTC)
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: dracowwmrsweasleydo on October 7th, 2009 11:07 pm (UTC)
Re: Submission VOTE!
There are so many beautiful phrases in this. The contrast is lovely, too, and the parallels. Very physical.
hull1984: Fire&Ice1hull1984 on October 7th, 2009 11:27 pm (UTC)
Re: Submission VOTE!
Thank you.

Your lovely comment is a huge relief - I swore off drabbles after a particularly bad experience and this my first attempt since. You have no idea how much I was shaking when I opened your e-mail ;)

WhatWldMrsweasleydo: rupertwwmrsweasleydo on October 8th, 2009 07:25 am (UTC)
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Nothing to worry about. Tricky length, drabbles. This is like a prose poem, which works really well. I really like the way you've handled this. The idea is great, but the actual practise is what impressed me most.
Hannah: RnD-Cherishedstuckinsea on October 8th, 2009 05:18 am (UTC)
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Oh my dear, Jo. This is wonderful. Going from one extreme to another, utterly Ron and Draco...perfect. I love your writing and it makes me smile when I see it...thank you, thank you for writing this. Loved it!
hull1984: Fire&Ice1hull1984 on October 8th, 2009 06:09 am (UTC)
Re: VOTE!!!!
Thank you, sweetie :)

You always say the kindest things.

*hugs*
Sir Pants: Cartmanmamalaz on October 8th, 2009 09:30 pm (UTC)
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HOT DAMN! Loved every second!
hull1984: Fire&Ice2hull1984 on October 9th, 2009 08:19 am (UTC)
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Thanks you, hon :)
SeraphimeRisingseraphimerising on October 10th, 2009 08:37 pm (UTC)
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Lovely imagery.

Great job.
hull1984: Fire&Ice2hull1984 on October 10th, 2009 09:06 pm (UTC)
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Thank you :)