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06 October 2009 @ 01:00 pm
DRA(W)BBLE DUEL #4  
Dra(w)bble Duel #4 is OPEN! :D



Prompt of the week: Fight! Fight! Fight!



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Remember, the score stands at 28 to 28, a tie!
 
 
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: tannerwwmrsweasleydo on October 8th, 2009 01:04 pm (UTC)
submission
Title: A Letter from the Dark
Team: Ron
Rating/Warnings: Sad
Wordcount: 498
Prompt: Fight!Fight!Fight!
Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the Wizarding World.

Drabble:

Dear Ron Weasley,

I don't expect you will ever read this. Perhaps when I am dead it will be discovered amongst my possessions and forwarded to you. If that should happen then, I beg you, do not think too poorly of me for having written this down.

You did not come to school this year. At the welcoming feast I scanned the Great Hall, looking for the three of you. I kept expecting you to walk into lessons. I found myself, shockingly, missing you.

I missed the fighting. We used to taunt each other, wind each other up to exploding point. I wanted to watch your face turn red and sweaty, see your knuckles whiten round your wand, have flashing eyes bore into mine. Tension builds and I have nobody to relieve it on, nobody who can react the way you do. I want the warmth of your hand on my throat to remind me I'm alive.

Father has been freed from Azkaban. When I watch the way our Master treats him, I think he was safer there. Our home has been taken over. I long to escape to school, but that is now controlled by Death Eaters also, and is little better.

Here I am a slave, and a prisoner as much as Lovegood is. At least she isn't forced to torture people. I should be better at this. It is what I was bred for, trained for: to serve the Dark Lord. I can't stand the blood or the screams. You always said I was a coward.

It should be easy to kill Muggles, especially bound and weak and terrified. However, in spite of the lessons I learnt from babyhood, I find that it is not. I empathise. I'm afraid this is because of your friend Hermione. As much as I hate her – and believe me, I hate her more every year – I cannot deny that she is a person, with feelings, abilities and consciousness.

She is far more likely to survive this war than I am, will probably live into an old age, together with you, in a cosy home, wasting mundane days on domesticity. This is why I hate her. Because that is what I want for myself.

After Crucio, when I lie aching and weak on a stone floor, my mind curls into itself and I picture a happy place. There is a fire, music, softness, warmth and you. As the pain retreats, I paint in details: kissing, laughter. You stroke my back. When I stop hurting, I can think of going further, of our bodies moving together, touching in every place, grinding, thrusting, teasing each other up to exploding point.

I expect to die here, in the place which was once my home, at the hands of the Lord I have been raised to adore. I hope you live. I hope you will be happy and that sometimes you may think of me, perhaps occasionally without hatred,

yours,

Draco Malfoy
soft twig boysexyscholar on October 8th, 2009 02:05 pm (UTC)
VOTE.
Jesus. You made me cry.

This is beautiful.

It's writing like this that makes me wonder what the hell I'm doing even trying. This is just so perfect.

Edited at 2009-10-08 02:06 pm (UTC)
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: tannerwwmrsweasleydo on October 8th, 2009 02:55 pm (UTC)
Re: VOTE.
Whattyatalkinabout? You writes such hot pron my mind mushes! Now that's what descriptive writing is for!

Thank you very much. I am so happy that I made you cry (if you see what I mean?) 'Perfect'. That's the best review I could get, isn't it?

Now you write more sexy fighting y/y?

p.s recognise my icon?
soft twig boy: Random: Gabriel/Jedsexyscholar on October 8th, 2009 03:29 pm (UTC)
Re: VOTE.
It's wonderful. And so very Draco to write it all down in a letter that Ron may never see...and even if he does, he can't confront Draco and *do* something about it.

It's gorgeous and tragic and I adore it.

You writes such hot pron my mind mushes!

THANK YOU! It might be nice to write something *other* than smutty smut every now and then, though. But that's what comes to me, so I suppose I should just leave it be. :p

Now you write more sexy fighting y/y?

I'll see what I can do. ;)

p.s recognise my icon?

Is...is that TANNER? :FLAILS:

slkfj

Does my icon look familiar? (Hint: follow the butterfiles...)
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: tannerwwmrsweasleydo on October 8th, 2009 04:06 pm (UTC)
Re: VOTE.
That would be a nice pairing, wouldn't it? Jed/Tanner. It exists only in my head, though. Probably.
soft twig boy: Random: Gabriel/Jedsexyscholar on October 8th, 2009 05:12 pm (UTC)
Re: VOTE.
Jed/Tanner

fffffffffffffffffff

With Jed bottoming...because from what I understand, that's his preference.

(btw, I'm trying to procure some more of his stuff. There's even a solo. fdkfjaklja)
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: tannerwwmrsweasleydo on October 8th, 2009 10:29 pm (UTC)
Re: VOTE.
But Tanner is so gifted. And he has those legs! Meanwhile, he looks so wholesome. I think it's that contrast that really does me in.
hull1984: Fire&Ice2hull1984 on October 9th, 2009 08:25 am (UTC)
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Oh this broke my heart. I love the idea - letters from his prison-home, and you executed it beautifully.

I'd love to see this extended, perhaps Ron finding/being sent the letter by a third party etc...

*off to daydream*
WhatWldMrsweasleydowwmrsweasleydo on October 9th, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
Re: VOTE
Thank you!

Feel free to continue this story yourself, though I'll see how my muse is in future weeks' duels!
Sir Pantsmamalaz on October 9th, 2009 07:52 pm (UTC)
VOTE
So sad. So touching. So awesome. :D
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: dracowwmrsweasleydo on October 11th, 2009 04:11 pm (UTC)
Re: VOTE
Thanks!
SeraphimeRisingseraphimerising on October 10th, 2009 08:42 pm (UTC)
Vote
*speechless*
WhatWldMrsweasleydo: ronwwmrsweasleydo on October 11th, 2009 04:12 pm (UTC)
Re: Vote
Well, isn't that unusual?

Thanks, babe!